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Can you spot the mistakes?

Pace your findings in the comments. My sponsoring editor Staci with Prestige Prose will post the correct answers on Monday. Have fun!!!

Let’s play a game.  Can you find all of the mistakes on this passage?

I slowly awoke. My eyes took awhile to adjust to the bright lights above my head This did not look like home. I too in surrounding exhaling. Where was I? Why am I here. Turning her head to the left, I noticed Stephen Aldridge, sitting on a couch next to where she was laying. The couch is mustard brown with tiny oranges x’s shattered about.
“Sephen?” She asked in a daze.
​”Good morning to you too, my Love.” His smile was filled with worry and anxiety.
“Where am I,” I speak with uncertainty.
​”You are in my basement, my dear,” he breathes heavily.
“Yea? Why?”
“Because, Bernie, you died.’ He exhales as he speaks.

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Did you find them all? Check your answers below.
I slowly awoke. My eyes take a while to adjust to the bright lights above my head. This does not look like home. I take in my surroundings, exhaling. Where am I? Why am I here? Turning my head to the left, I notice Stephen Aldridge sitting on a couch next to where I am lying. The couch is mustard brown with tiny orange x’s scattered across it.

“Stephen?” I ask, dazed.

“Good morning to you, too, my love.” His smile is filled with worry and anxiety.

“Where am I?” I speak with uncertainty.

“You are in my basement, my dear.” He breathes heavily.

Yeah? Why?”

“Because, Bernie, you died.” He exhales as he speaks.

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The wait is coming to an end

Hi y’all!

The wait is coming to end.   There are so many exciting things happening at Elegant Ink Entertainment! As my followers have heard, Darkness Awakens is getting live action! You heard right!!!! Darkness Awakens is getting a LIVE video trailer. I will have more details as they are released to me. #DarknessAwakens will reveal pics and more info.  My website will be updating soon, as well.

I have been nominated for 2017 Top Female Author Award! I’m just excited to be nominated.  I am so honored that one of my fans submitted my work for the award. That is the true honor. 

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So many exciting things…

Stayed tuned right here to discover new & exciting things that are happening.  I can’t reveal anything just yet, but I’m super excited!!!!!!

#DarknessAwakensReview

Here is a new review for Darkness Awakens

1 of 1 people found the following helpful
Flew through it. Craving more. April 7, 2016

WOW! I cant believe I hadn’t heard of this author before. Darkness Awakens is a must read for sure. I have only read the sample and cant wait to finish it. The first chapter had me intrigued, the second had me cracking up with laughter and the third…it will leave you craving more and more. I highly recommend this book. 5 stars to the author and Darkness Awakens. (Back to reading)

***Update***
I said it before…Read More

WOW! I cant believe I hadn’t heard of this author before. Darkness Awakens is a must read for sure. I have only read the sample and cant wait to finish it. The first chapter had me intrigued, the second had me cracking up with laughter and the third…it will leave you craving more and more. I highly recommend this book. 5 stars to the author and Darkness Awakens. (Back to reading)

 

#DarknessAwakensReview

1 of 1 people found the following helpful
Flew through it. Craving more. April 7, 2016
WOW! I cant believe I hadn’t heard of this author before. Darkness Awakens is a must read for sure. I have only read the sample and cant wait to finish it. The first chapter had me intrigued, the second had me cracking up with laughter and the third…it will leave you craving more and more. I highly recommend this book. 5 stars to the author and Darkness Awakens. (Back to reading)
***Update***
I said it before and I’ll say it again. I highly recommend this book. It a suspenseful, mysterious, hang on the edge of your seat sort of story. I will not go into detail on this book due to spoilers. All I can say is I could not put it down. Kari Chaplin had me in an uproar of questions on what was happening and what was going to happen next. Darkness Awakens is very well written and if I could give it more stars I would. Wonderful job! Can’t wait for the next installment. (Prologue for next book at the end)