Week 4-What do you see?

 

“Are they near?” I asked Cecelia.
“Coming from our left, get ready,” she advises our group.
“Let’s finish this!” I say as our enemies come into view. “Ready?”
“As ready as ever,” Steve replied with an ornery smirk. As the enemy clan encircled us, I felt a surge of strength and power wash through my frame.

Corrections

“Are they near?” I asked Cecelia.

“Coming from our left. Get ready,” she advised our group.

“Let’s finish this!” I said as our enemies came into view. “Ready?”

“As ready as ever,” Steve replied with an ornery smirk. As the enemy clan encircled us, I felt a surge of strength and power wash through my frame.

 

 

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