Game-Week 2 (catch the errors)–The ANSWERS are here!

“Hey, Smith, look at this,” My partner in crime demanded.
“What is it,” I reply in wonderment.
“The place is apparently already been robbed, dude,” he aid in disbeilve.
“Wow!” I says in conculusion.
“Let’s get outta here,” Smith bellow.
We ran as fast as we can to get the hell out of dodge.

Okay… the wait is over! I am posting 2 alternative. The 1st works but the 2nd is actually correct.

Version 1 – corrected all original text:

 

“Hey, Smith, look at this,” my partner in crime demanded.

“What is it?” I replied.

“The place has apparently already been robbed, dude,” he said in disbelief.

“Wow!” I said in conclusion.

“Let’s get outta here,” he bellowed.

We run as fast as we can to get the hell outta Dodge.

 

 

Version 2 – Took out extra info in dialogue tags:

 

“Hey, Smith, look at this,” my partner in crime demanded.

“What is it?” I replied.

“The place has apparently already been robbed, dude.”

“Wow!”

“Let’s get outta here.”

We run as fast as we can to get the hell outta Dodge.

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