Can you spot the mistakes?

Pace your findings in the comments. My sponsoring editor Staci with Prestige Prose will post the correct answers on Monday. Have fun!!!

Let’s play a game.  Can you find all of the mistakes on this passage?

I slowly awoke. My eyes took awhile to adjust to the bright lights above my head This did not look like home. I too in surrounding exhaling. Where was I? Why am I here. Turning her head to the left, I noticed Stephen Aldridge, sitting on a couch next to where she was laying. The couch is mustard brown with tiny oranges x’s shattered about.
“Sephen?” She asked in a daze.
​”Good morning to you too, my Love.” His smile was filled with worry and anxiety.
“Where am I,” I speak with uncertainty.
​”You are in my basement, my dear,” he breathes heavily.
“Yea? Why?”
“Because, Bernie, you died.’ He exhales as he speaks.

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I slowly awoke. My eyes take a while to adjust to the bright lights above my head. This does not look like home. I take in my surroundings, exhaling. Where am I? Why am I here? Turning my head to the left, I notice Stephen Aldridge sitting on a couch next to where I am lying. The couch is mustard brown with tiny orange x’s scattered across it.

“Stephen?” I ask, dazed.

“Good morning to you, too, my love.” His smile is filled with worry and anxiety.

“Where am I?” I speak with uncertainty.

“You are in my basement, my dear.” He breathes heavily.

Yeah? Why?”

“Because, Bernie, you died.” He exhales as he speaks.

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